tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773820892616665200.post5862624473894474230..comments2023-10-31T01:54:14.511-07:00Comments on A Really Nice Murder Blog: Two Steps Forward...Mary Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04173848032638392506noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773820892616665200.post-34071670408515167192008-11-22T09:35:00.000-08:002008-11-22T09:35:00.000-08:00A good one upmanship is always nice. My heroine t...A good one upmanship is always nice. My heroine takes few false steps from being naive and lacking key bits of information. Stupidity is another matter and this twist would have required her to blab an important bit of information to a group of people when she has already realized she is in danger. <BR/><BR/>No. Can't do it. <BR/>But I think I've found a different way to get the same effect as that twist.Mary Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04173848032638392506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773820892616665200.post-72748163488277306222008-11-22T01:33:00.000-08:002008-11-22T01:33:00.000-08:00Good call on the TSTL moment. It's a turn-off for ...Good call on the TSTL moment. It's a turn-off for me when anyone in a book has one of those brain-loss experiences, whether that person is an antagonist or a protagonist.<BR/><BR/>In my WIP, it's leading to a kind of arms race - the heroine did something smart, but the antagonist pulled an even cleverer trick on her.Marian Pererahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700524210146863718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1773820892616665200.post-19321479572208897872008-11-19T08:07:00.000-08:002008-11-19T08:07:00.000-08:00Hey Mary,I'm so happy for you- getting an epiphany...Hey Mary,<BR/><BR/>I'm so happy for you- getting an epiphany for your novel.<BR/><BR/>Good luck with pulling it off. I'm sure you will. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com